the Rise

"your wha...dont be stupid youll kill yourself "

"so"

"No, im not letting you , your mum and dad died to give you life and this is how you use it" i meant these words to hurt , and they did , she looked at me through grey eyes , her expresion full of sorrow "you dident have to bring that up"

"sorry" .

Haily was a special girl , she was the only person i know that will, without a seconds hesitation throw herself at a greyback , these creatures are sort of like the police for the empire , they serve the king Karsh . They are Beefed up were wolfs that have no will of there own , they listen to anyone that summons them, and in this case it was the Rich . The empire is made up of the Rich , the normals and us . "Scum" as we are called "do not feel , the most precious of all things . Imotion " those are the words of king Karsh , by saying this he has made it legal to hunt us , thats write , the rich hunt us with rifels , hounds, arrows any thing that can kill, they go on hunting trips for there entertainment , The word of the king is law so if we dont co-oporate we will be punished , we must run and make it an entertaining chase but in the end we let them take our lifes . your thinking , what punishment is worse than death , soul eating is . We are human just like them , but we are poorer , we have no voice .

Haily, me and twenty more adults make up the risistance , we fight the Grey backs with swords and tridents , we try to kill as many of the rich as possible but we hardly impact the surface , like a flea on a dogs ear ,one small shake and were all dead . But our leader , Mace sais theres a new task for us , one that will leave the rich shaken , hes going to tell us tonight what it is . *shall i keep writing this story to make it a novel ?*

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This is full of spelling and grammatical errors. You should fix these errors before continuing.



I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault